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-              A recipe for self-managed co-operative computing.
+              A recipe for self-managed co-operative computing
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               Servers.coop is an algorithm for co-operation: a technical,
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                   <a href="https://git.autonomic.zone/3wordchant/capsul-flask"
                     >Capsul</a
                   >, a brand new Affero GPL licensed Virtual Machine as a
-                  Service platform
+                  Service platform.
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                   Co-operative ownership models and toolkits for software,
-                  hardware and social protocols for creating and operating a
-                  server hosting provider
+                  hardware and social protocols designed to help create and
+                  operate a server hosting provider.
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