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 The monopolisation of our digital lives, the stranglehold of corporate control (aka [GAFAM](https://degooglisons-internet.org/en/)), represents a grave threat to our collective freedom, our societies and our hopes for a good life on planet earth.
 
-We must however acknowledge their vast accumulation of network effects and resources. We must acknowledge that no single project, product or organisation can create the required shift to a more widespread public interest technology.
+We begin with an acknowledgment of their vast accumulation of network effects and resources. We also acknowledge that no single project, product or organisation can create the required shift to a more widespread public interest technology.
 
 > Technology alone will not save us.
 >