From e3a178e5fcc16043a0d62b70aacb74474f6eac57 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: decentral1se Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2025 17:09:25 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] docs: wording --- docs/intro/strategy.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/intro/strategy.md b/docs/intro/strategy.md index be0f63c..4c006a2 100644 --- a/docs/intro/strategy.md +++ b/docs/intro/strategy.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The urgency to build an alternative is based on an analysis of our current reali The monopolisation of our digital lives, the stranglehold of corporate control (aka [GAFAM](https://degooglisons-internet.org/en/)), represents a grave threat to our collective freedom, our societies and our hopes for a good life on planet earth. -We must however acknowledge their vast accumulation of network effects and resources. We must acknowledge that no single project, product or organisation can create the required shift to a more widespread public interest technology. +We begin with an acknowledgment of their vast accumulation of network effects and resources. We also acknowledge that no single project, product or organisation can create the required shift to a more widespread public interest technology. > Technology alone will not save us. >