more changes + responding to feedback

Reviewed-on: #12

README.md

@@ -46,12 +46,12 @@ npx astro dev
   
 # To release a new version
 
-## Build in the docker image (make sure you have Docker installed!)
+## Build the Docker image (this requires having [Docker](https://docs.docker.com/engine/install/) installed!)
 
 Set the version to the next [semantic version](https://semver.org/) after the version posted at [our co-op cloud's packages site](https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/-/packages) under "rtmwebsite":
 
 ``` bash
-version=<specify-version>
+version=<specify-version> # example: if the semantic version you see for "rtmwebsite" is 0.0.1, then put version=0.0.2 here since we want to deploy the next version
 docker build --platform linux/amd64 -t git.coopcloud.tech/rtm/rtmwebsite:$version .
 ```
 
@@ -68,7 +68,11 @@ At [our co-op cloud's packages site](https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/-/packages),
 
 ## Update recipe
 
-We use a [private recipe](https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/rtm-astro-recipe) to deploy this website. This step needs Wireguard to be activated (download Wireguard and ask Sootie's owner to create a config for you and give you Docker permissions). The following examples will assume your name in Sootie's config is "blueberry"!
+### One-time Setup
+
+We use a [private recipe](https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/rtm-astro-recipe) to deploy this website. This step needs Tailscale to be activated. Follow our [Fleet Setup and Access Instructions](https://nextcloud.resisttechmonopolies.online/apps/collectives/RTM-Reference-2/Fleet-Setup-and-access-12904) and get set up on Laylotta.
+
+The following examples will assume your name in Sootie's config is "blueberry"!
 
 You will need to have wget (`brew install wget` on mac) and [abra](https://docs.coopcloud.tech/abra/) installed.
 
@@ -76,7 +80,6 @@ Create an SSH key to use with Sootie with the following command. Take note of th
 
 ```ssh-keygen -t ed25519```
 
-
 Run the following commands to install the SSH key to Sootie as an authorized key:
 
 ```
@@ -84,7 +87,6 @@ ssh-copy-id -i $HOME/.ssh/rtm.pub blueberry@resisttechmonopolies.online
 ssh -i $HOME/.ssh/rtm 'blueberry@resisttechmonopolies.online'          
 ```
 
-
 In the `$HOME/.ssh/config` file (which you may have to create if it does not exist), paste the following:
 
 ```
@@ -97,32 +99,36 @@ Host resisttechmonopolies.online
 
 You should now be able to SSH into Sootie with just the command `ssh resisttechmonopolies.online`
 
-
-Run the following command (outside of the terminal in which you ran ssh in the previous step)
+Run the following command (OUTSIDE of the terminal in which you ran ssh in the previous step)
 
 ```abra server add resisttechmonopolies.online```
 
-Clone the `sootie-config` repo into your `$HOME/.abra/servers/resisttechmonopolies.online` directory:
+Clone the `rtm-config` repo:
 
 ``` bash
-git clone https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/sootie-config.git .
-# DON'T FORGET THE . AT THE END OF THE COMMAND
+git clone https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/rtm-config.git
 ```
 
 Clone the `rtm-astro-recipe` repo into your `$HOME/.abra/recipes` directory:
 
 ```git clone https://git.coopcloud.tech/RTM/rtm-astro-recipe.git```
 
+### Every time you deploy
 
-Update the version number to the latest in 
+Make sure you are connected to Laylotta on Tailscale.
+
+Update the version number to the latest (the one that you pushed to the Gitea registry previously) in
 
 ``` bash
-.abra/servers/resisttechmonopolies.online/resisttechmonopolies.online.env
+rtm-config/abra/servers/laylotta.resisttechmonopolies.online/resisttechmonopolies.online.env
 ```
 
-Then
+Then make sure you are in the rtm-config directory and run the following commands:
+
 ``` bash
 abra app undeploy resisttechmonopolies.online
-# wait 10 seconds
+# verify that there is a 404 page at https://resisttechmonopolies.online/
+
 abra app deploy resisttechmonopolies.online
-```
+# verify that the new version is present at https://resisttechmonopolies.online/
+```